I do enjoy Barbie's dialogue in this chapters (Dude. You write sleep talk like a pro.) but I think the 3rd panel, where it's zoomed in on Morah's face ye coulda done a better job on the bloodshot eyes yo. But otherwise, I think it's pretty good! Keep the comics goin'!
Well, I think that you've got the basic step of drawing bloodshot eyes done already- the ring of pinkish red around the inside of the line. I think you could've added smaller also reddish lines pointing towards the pupil to create a veiny effect instead of just having a haze of red around the outline of the eye.