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Idano - Rage Quit

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GEEZE.
GOSH.

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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

First of all i would like to get this out of the way. your art in this particular piece is over all Very nice and as usual makes me want to read more. I really love the simple cell shading you do and your colors are always so nice to look at especially with your style of eyes and drawing in general. However i would like to recommend that you watch the shading in places. though its only a little bit, in some instances there would be no highlight such as around the collar area and head opposite of your light source. just make sure to keep those in mind. Another point i would like to address is the last 2 panels. Perhaps its just me but i feel as though the anatomy on your legs is a bit off. with the type of structure your doing i believe that it would be very uncomfortable or even painful to have your legs that close together. Back to an up note. your style of fur is very simple, yet it gets the point across, it really goes well with your style. Especially with the fur around your chest, i see no need to change or alter it in the least. Another thing i would like to address however is your background, especially in panel 5. I will be completely honest when i say it looks very lazy to me. In panel 5 it really takes away from the picture for me. Right in front of the very vivid blue adorable creature, is a very dull grey blob. If at all possible please keep that in mind and i recommend putting a bit more detail in your background and or foregrounds even if its just a little more. Having such a dull background with such vivid characters can really take away from the art and makes reading a bit hard for your viewers. In all i do like this piece quite a bit, Though not as much as previous pages.